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StarFire's stupid move gone wrong by StarBlaze756

:iconiluvshaduwsumoch:
I definitely see what you're trying to do. But in order to capture the attention of people may I suggest doing more realistic colors.

And instead of doing anthro try doing a bit more realistic?The wings are magnificent in all truth, the paws could use some work along with the neck and face.The ears aren't too bad, and the hair..Well,that's everyone's own opinion,I personally don't like hair but to each their own.The 'cliff' shall we call it net to it could use some work too. Over all not too bad with muro.

Hope this helps, enjoy being a dA artist!
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ElRinaZuza Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It is real critique, at least quite adequate! Unfortunately it's too short from my point of view.
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:iconiluvshaduwsumoch:
Hehe,yeah,It was my first so I thought you could only do 100 words.^^
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:iconelrinazuza:
ElRinaZuza Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's nothing. I mean nothing bad. At least I love when person express his point of view, instead of beeing stupidly nice! It's nice work indeed.
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